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THE FIRE WITHIN - Beverly Clarke

Genesis/Indigo

1-58571-244-2

July 2007


SYNOPSIS:  Sparks fly in the boardroom and the bedroom in Clarks sizzling battle-of-the-sexes romance.


CONTEMPORARY ROMANCE |3| Marguerite Lemons


REVIEW:  Pandora Cooper is a genius with a flair for acquisitions and mergers. She’s made a name for herself as owner of the second largest investment firm on Wall Street. Julian Palmer, the CEO of Palmer and Associates, has been notified by his cousin Drac that Pandora has been secretly inquiring about his company’s stock. Having brought the company from the brinks of bankruptcy, Julian wants to let the “black widow of Wall Street” know that his company is not to be messed with. With the help of his cousin, he finagles an invitation to a charity dinner that Pandora is attending. Upon seeing her, Julian is awe struck and sparks fly between the two of them; at that moment Julian decides that Pandora is the woman for him. Just as Pandora and Julian let down their guards, their relationship is shattered when Drac informs Julian that Pandora is using him to takeover his company. Having been through this before, Julian ends the relationship without allowing Pandora the opportunity to defend herself; thereby ending any hope of them becoming a family.

THE FIRES WITHIN is about people learning to love and trust again after being used and abused by the people they thought loved them. Pandora was in an abusive marriage for years, and is still being harassed by her brother-in-law; with no intention of ever loving or marrying another man, she feels that her life is complete with her daughter and her company. Julian, having been used by his former fiancée, has sworn off women. But there is just something about Pandora that makes him decide to pursue a relationship. However, he discovers later on that he still lacks the trust needed to make the relationship successful.

The story is set in New York and the surrounding areas, and the plot moves along at a moderate pace. I have a problem with the fact that Pandora’s thirteen year old daughter was in the middle of their relationship. Both Pandora and Destinee should have gone to therapy after Pandora’s husband died, because Destinee developed an unhealthy attachment to Julian rather quickly; and Pandora needed to free herself from the past. It also bothered me that Julian used Destinee to get to her mother. It was unfair for him to use her “need” for fatherly love to get close to her mother. Julian’s cousin Drac and Pandora’s assistant Cassandra should have spent more time researching what was going on behind their bosses backs instead of focusing on their personal lives; thus alleviating the need for the relationship “meltdown” that occurred.

This story seemed to drag in spots, and the constant meddling, nagging, and sniping of some of the other characters is slightly annoying, but overall this is an enjoyable story.


reviewer@romanceincolor.com | 15th November 2007